English 10I have grown this year as a reader. The books I've read have challenged me, and made me think about the possibilities that my life could have been. The books I've read have shaped my personality and also helped me in my weakest spot in English, writing. My writing has lacked personal touches that other writers are very good at including in their pieces. Until this year I have never been proud of my writing. But I can proudly say that I am still improving myself everyday that I am on this Earth.
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My Five Best Pieces Of Writing1. Partner ArgumentI feel as if this piece has very strong pathos because that was what me and my partner were trying to focus on. The audience that we were trying to appeal to were the parents, because they have a lot of influence on the child's life. This writing piece is weak in the vocabulary area, with more descriptive verbs and nouns I feel this could be a very convincing piece.
2. Quotation WritingThis piece has very strong vocabulary, which appeals to Ethos. Imagery is also very evident in this small piece. A great grabber could widely improve this piece; it would keep the reader interested and wanting to read more, Over all I love this small writing piece.
3. One Person ArgumentThis argument is strong because it appeals strongly to ethos. I quote from multiple sources from all different professions. I could have implemented more pathos into this argument to backup my statements better.
4. Ways We SleepThis essay is strong because it has relatable language which helps the audience understand what the essay is trying to portray. This essay could be improved by having a set organization of the topics that are in the essay.
5. Ray BradburyThis essay strongly appeals to ethos because of the references to the book. This could be stronger if I put stronger language in the paragraph.
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1. I feel as if my "This I Believe Essay" is the strongest piece of writing from my sophomore year.
2. My Polyvore account is were I put together outfits. I really enjoy fashion.
2. My Polyvore account is were I put together outfits. I really enjoy fashion.